Friday, May 15, 2009

peer edit

stephanie - Did a good job explaining an example of what the seniors want. Explain more what what the adminisration has been turning down. but it was a interesting topic and i also think the it could have went into more detail but over all it was good

jessica - did a very good job explaining with good details and also with the interview. it is very discriptive what you are talking about. this is a topic really that students dont really get invovled in but i think you did a good job explaining yourself

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